Sorry for the wait. I was waiting for some more proofreads, but it’s now Friday, so I better release this. If there are errors found, I’ll update the file.
This chapter touches on the matter of male virginity, which is never really dealt with in shoujo (I’m not even sure it’s dealt with in manga in general). Shoujo seems to assume that the males are experienced while all the females are innocent. Of course this makes no sense because who would the boys be getting experience with? I won’t say any more about this chapter other than I’m anxious to see how the situation is resolved in the next chapter.
And now for the release!
Update 08/13/2016: Fixed some minor typos.
Links to “Kanojo ni Naru Hi” Chapter 16: (PDF) (Zip)
Next up is “Sabaku no Harem” Chapter 14!
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That was very interesting. I think I need to see the resolution before I form a real opinion though.
Thank you!
Thank you for the release
Thanks for your hard work. I appreciate it so much.
Thank you!
pg17: over look > overlook
Thank you very much! ❤
Thank you for the work!
“I like woman, that’s why I want to become a woman.” NANNIIIEEE?!?!!
Yay, thanks for a new chapter!
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Thanks for the new chapter😊😊😊😊
Thanks a lot! 😀
Thanks for release. Next one is the last chapter? Myanimelist says Kanojo ni Naru Hi: Another -> Published: Oct 10, 2013 to Oct 8, 2016
Thank.you for info
Thank you for translation……..and can I ask if the chapter 17 is still to release??? Its been october already!!!!!thank you:-) 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Hah, loved the comment on shoujo. You sure don’t see male characters have insecurity when it comes to sex that’s for sure.
As a man, I can relate in this chapter. There is an immense pressure to able to procure women pleasure and this can be crippling to some. Male achieving orgasm is not an achievement because it is so easy to get to, not so for women and this is why this is a thing. Because of various factors, many women are unsatisfied in their sex lives and you don’t want to be part of the problem as a man.
In fact, every woman is different and with every new partner I’d say there’s still this apprehension before the first time. At least it was for me, I can’t speak for others.
What you’ve learned from others might not apply to the next and you have to be able to catch this.
It does not help that even in this post-feminism world women still feel shy or insecure vocalizing what they want and you’re stuck trying to figure out what works by looking in their eyes/expressions and other bodily responses for clues on if you’re doing the right or wrong thing at any given time. Sometime it can be hard, you’re expected to perform.
This can be stressful and makes the initial encounter(s) less enjoyable because it becomes a test of sorts that you somehow feel like you need to hit high marks.
No one would expect a student to pass a test that he hasn’t taken the class for, and yet…
Not that I think Mamiya would be this kind of lover, I have a strong feeling Miyoshi would probably get too much information ^_^
Not that there’s ever too much information in this department.
TL ; DR Small commentary about women asking for better loving ( as they should ) but often having self-defeating attitudes toward achievement that goal which gives additional stress and anxiety towards their partners.